Project 3: Story telling speed paints

I'm finding it difficult to get the story I want to tell down in words, It seems to lack the real emotion which i think I can only express through drawing.
I speed paint every day on photoshop, but I often don't save my work. Today's sketches didn't really work for me in terms of actual drawings, but I think there's a strong emotion about to be expressed. I don't yet think these drawings fully express the scenes, but it's a beginning and I feel is the best way for me to get my ideas down.

I feel like the first picture needs orange, somewhere... Maybe a light coming from the view point? But I didn't have time to add more, I limited my time for these.